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Car by CHLI

Car

by CHLI


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Hey Christina!

I'd like to start off by saying that this is a great drawing. :)

Cars are hard to draw, so I think I can help you a bit. :D

Let's start off with what's wrong:
- The front-right wheel is missing
- Grill at the front of the car is warped
- Car leaning to the left.

Okay, so since the front-right wheel is missing, all you need to do is draw it in. It shouldn't be that hard. :)

The grill at the front of the car appearing warped was unintended, I'm sure. However, I think that you can fix this my making all the lines in the middle of the grill perfectly horizontal, instead of sideways.

Lastly, the fact that the car is leaning to the left can be corrected making the top of the car (where the roof is) level with the floor.

I hope this helps. :la:
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CHLI Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for the critique =) I thought those mistakes were unfixable, I guess not.
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darklordAWSOMEDUDE Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Student General Artist
a few things
maybe we're notsupposed to see the weel because of it's angle. maybe that's what the artist intended.
some artist want their arts seen on an angle. I'm not sure about this artist wanted it that ways or not but maybe
and finally a lot of car drawings look warped. hat's for effect. some on purpose some unintended. again I cannot say wether the artist intended it or not but yeah
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